Narrative wise its kinda short and simple while the interactions between the characters seems kinda lacking . There's a few unanswered questions such as the incident with lyla in the letters with carl but real nice of putting a narrative on that serial murder without out right telling the player who the first serial killer is ( i might be wrong on this though).
I feel narrative need more interactions between characters or to know more about the player character and doors kinda jank to walk through sometimes. Looking forward to your next work